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How to write an award-winning editorial

A panel of experts shares advice on the topic.

By Lisa McTigue Pierce
Editor-in-Chief, Food & Drug Packaging
President, Chicago Chapter ASBPE

The editor's column should be written to serve the magazine's readers, not to win awards. That said, some of the best editorials - award-winning editorials! - have followed this simple four-step recipe:

  1. Identify and research an important, timely industry issue.
  2. Discuss the arguments from various sides.
  3. Express your opinion to help resolve the issue.
  4. Ask readers to take positive action.

Recently, members of the Chicago ASBPE chapter gathered to discuss the dos and don'ts of writing award-winning editorials. Panelists were:

  • Chuck Boyles, Editor, Pumping Technologies
  • Kirk Landers, Editor, Construction Equipment
  • Bob Sperber, Editor, Software Strategies

Advice and comments also came long distance from Doug Condra, Editorial Director, Newport Communications, through an earlier telephone interview.

Nearly all business-to-business magazines publish an editorial. Why?

"The editorial is the most highly differentiated piece in the publication," said Bob Sperber. It's what separates you most distinctly from your competitors."

Ultimately it creates an image with readers, as well as with advertisers. (It also sets up a valuable ad position that your sales department can sell.)

Well-written columns build rapport and credibility with your readers. Editors do - and should - assume a leadership role within their industry, and the editorial page lets them demonstrate their authority, knowledge and passion for the business.

Is Your Subject Important?

To start, identify the critical issues by being involved in your industry.

Doug Condra says, "Know the key players, read, talk to a lot of people." Get out to trade shows, seminars, plant visits. Listen to what your readers and advertisers are talking about. Ask questions.

Show Your Research

Then, once you have a topic in mind, do your homework. Research the different sides and present the information in a way that supports your position. (This is your opinion after all.)

If the issue is a difficult one to resolve, offer readers your opinion and some advice. Give readers direction. Perhaps ask for compromises to be made.

Tell Your Readers How

"Get your readers involved," Condra continues. "Tell them how, down to giving them an address or phone number." This makes it easy for them to take action.

Tip: As a companion to your editorial column, publish letters to the editor. You may get some lively and worthwhile discussions going.

The style of writing should be straightforward and simple, more informal than formal . . . chatty. "It's like a good speech," Condra says. "You might even want to start with a joke. Humor is a great tool to get people to start reading, and keep them reading until the end." He warns, though, to make sure you know your readers so you know what kind of humor is appropriate.

Kirk Landers agrees that your personality should be evident. "Don't hold back," he says. "Be colorful. People will warm to you and you may imPublication a judge or two."

A sure way to alienate judges, though, is an editorial column that's abundant with acronyms or abbreviations that only "insiders" will understand. But this members-only language can backfire even with industry veterans. Chuck Boyles cautions, "Using acronyms can alienate many potential readers - especially your new readers." When in doubt, spell it out.

Did Your Readers Respond?

Okay. You've written 12 months of great copy. How do you pick which editorial(s) to submit for a competition? The answer from the speakers was unanimous, "Submit editorials that have received a lot of response from readers."


Dos and Don'ts for an award-winning editorial

DO advocate change if you think it's necessary in your industry.

DON'T use acronyms or abbreviations without explaining them.

DO publish a photo of the editor. Tip: Take several different poses in different clothes and alternate the photo you use each time. Let your personality show!

DON'T write an editorial that is nothing more than a glorified contents page, talking only about stories in the magazine.

DO include evidence or research to prove your opinion, if available.

DON'T be reckless in writing your editorial. You could lose credibility. Make sure you research and think your points through before taking a position.

DO acknowledge errors in future issues to rebuild your credibility with readers.

DON'T be afraid to inject your personality in the writing.

DO stimulate thought and inform.

DON'T think that readers must always agree with you. Invite their comments.


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